I dont know what title should i give this post so let it be untitled
. If you can find one feel free to tell me
Mummy was clearing my cupboard at home and she got one paper. It has some lines which i wrote when i was in class 7th. I lost the diary in which i wrote the complete poem, but paper had some lines. The lines were outcome of what my parents told me when i was very disappointed by my half yearly exam result (I laugh at myself now that i used to care so much for marks
). My parents told me that success and failure are part of life and you should accept them in the same way. Be happy whatever the situation be. You should not get carried away from the success and should not get disappointed by failure. You should accept failures in a positive way and learn from them. The lines which i wrote were
Ye zindagi mere liye ek paheli hai,
jisme kabhi khushi hai to kabhi gham hai.
Khushiyan jeevan ko naya roop deti hai,
dukhon se zindagi ko nayi disha milti hai.
Khushiyon ka swagat to har insan muskarakar karta hai,
par dukhon ko hanste hue apnane ka naam zindagi hai.
I forgot the exact lines…but the meaning they carry is the same.
P.S : Agni won the throwball tournament \:D/ . Well done girls
P.S1. : Emon out of Indian Idol
. But i liked the way he took it.
P.S2 : India lost the series. England played well but major credit goes to Aleem Dar
P.S3 : Hope India will do well in 20-20 world cup.
P.S4 : Indian hockey team won the Asia Cup. Thanks to Chak de India, now i at least check the results of hockey matches.
P.S5 : Currently listening to : Ek din fursat (Zindaggi Rocks) lovely song.
P.S6 : This is the end
hey…
dint know dat u write poems…
gud lines…
Amit Paul is gonna win da.
nice poem… altleast this was a short one… otherwise i wudnt have taken the pain to read the whole
Nice poem.. pretty deep.
grr8 …
wish i cud read the whole poem.
so, here a work for u …
!!
complete the poem … n then post is again ..
@Swati,Spawn,Blah : Thanks a lot

. Will definitely try to complete it
@karan : Yeah amit paul will win but i wanted amit and emon in top2
@ankit : thanks a lot
lot of kushi and dukh in the poem
, pretty good , but you’ve got to change the template of your blog..the smoothie is way too distracting..
@Meghs
first u edit my comment and then write thanks a lot.. i didnt write anything very vulgar or obscene, which made u delete my comment…
Grow up Baby !!
this is what all your poem is about
@BLAH: I accept that you dint write anything vulgar,,,but i edited it because i felt the need. This baby will take time to Grow Up.
I tried finding ur identity but coukd’nt otherwise wouldn’t have edited it without informing u.
I am grateful that you took time to visit the blog and read the post. Thats why i wrote Thanks.
I am really sorry if i have hurt u but the intention was not that.
@tipo : Thanks a lot
. Will change the template as soon as i find a better one
hmm, thanks for replying back. Ideally speaking i expected even this comment to be deleted/edited. There is no need to find my identity… as BLAH is something like iiit123, every anonymous comment will be written from some BLAH/blah,blahBlah etc. I am sorry that i wrote a comment which made you edit, will write better one next time
so keep blogging, enjoy !!
@BLAH : Thanks…i hope u continue visiting my blog
Nice post.. and gg to agni..
@lifeandsuch : Thanks
u are pretty good at poems yaar…i just cant believe u penned that in ur 7th class…good…well i think i can suggest u a title for this post…how about “childhood musings”
A poem with very deep meaning …
and you say you were in 7th? *wow*
GBU
Arti
nice poem and i think u can write now also.just give it a try .